Head Hopping

[foreverdawning]

 Head hopping is my kryptonite. I always seem to want to get into the heads of every character in all my fanfic. But after reading this side-by-side comparison it's changed my mind. 

Comments

[mesotablar]

oooh, thank you for posting that link! I don't headhop in that way (I tend to do short paragraphs with clear POV switches) but recently I've been struggling on a work were I didn't want to do that but I couldn't seem to do a single third person. Those points on non-viewpoint characters are such a help already

[hughville]

Wow. Mind. Blown.

What a difference it makes to stay in the "mind" of one character and not bounce around!! Thank you so much for sharing this.